Hey dis is a great poem....keep up the wicked work!
thanx for your comment!

Wow... this was so beautifully written that now i don't have words to explain... so true... and deep, ofcourse....

Keep writing..

Much Love,
Ipsita

I will give you a damn,
I will give you a thanks,
I will give you appreaciation,
and I will give you my compliments.
I thought this poem captured beauty and it captured many thoughts.
in other words... I like!

specialy the following lines:

if you could just understand what i mean
then there has to be loads of pain that you have seen

*dances around in admireation...* I love these lines, I have been trying to think of lines to be as captivating as this for in my supersweet suicide! talkin bout that poem, you asked for my imagination... well there wasn't any besides the funeral bit. that's why it's called my supersweet suicide =P

take care of yourself, and keep on writing!
~*TasH*~

Woah another amazing poem i love it keep up the good work 5/5 and i dont have a secret really..i jsur write when im depressed..i guess the sh!+ tht happens to me is my insperation 2 write =S

Wowie! i only saw one grammer error...but the rest was good...the line:
did you wondered why
whould wondered be wonder? besides that i luvd it...there was a lotta emmotion! 5/5!
~*Who Cares?*~

Oh wow!! i really liked your poem. There are just so many hidden messages in it. Expressed beautifully. Keep it up xoxox

Omg !!
you're amazing!!
great work nitin..OF COURSE I LOVE UR WORK!! haha
so deep..wow i need to take classes from u:P
take care xoxo

Nice write, the only suggestion I'd make it that 'wondered' should be spelt 'wonder' as it doesn't quite make sense spelt the other way. I like the different stanza lengths you've got in here, it makes the piece more interesting to read.

Alright...I won't say I fully understand it..just a little...maybe because I do not have any pain yet...well...but I do love the way this poem sounds...and hmm...it flows well lol...nice...love reading it out loud...

THis is a lovely poem. Very beautiful

Omg! a beautiful flow and i can understand it so well. amazing! 5/5 thanks for the comment on mine

Love Tiff

New announcement: did you wonder why
these friends share every moment of your happiness
did you wonder where
these friends hide at the moment of your loneliness

Very many people including myself, wonder this everyday. We are in love with the situation of having friends when the sun shines... But when something goes bad, they suddenly dissapear.. And when you finaly sort of get back on track they act like they had never left.... And you wrote about it!!! I wonder what took me so long to get to this poem. I like it a lot!

catch you later,
~*TasH*~

Outstanding poem! I dont think I have to tell you 'I know what you mean' right? I loved reading this again. Its one of my fav from your list. Excellent job on putting these feelings in to words and making this an exceptional poem.

Love
Michelle

Wow again Nice poem and is very entertaining as i read it i was picturing a person running with a shadow and playing hacky sac with it and it is true there would be no sorrows in the world if everyone could have one person or thing to love them

Nitin
This is a wonderful piece you have penned. The imagery is amazing.

as i have a great companion with me
a friend who forever stays around me
his presence is all that makes the difference
his mere touch is something i long to sense

What a comfort this must bring. I have a friend who always stays with me that brings me comfort when I think of his smiling face.
Take care Love Cindy