Master Of Shadow,
I found this poem full of meaning, very deep indeed, I enjoyed it very much you have talent. I also wanted to thank you for the time it took you to read and comment my poem. I've also agree the last line isnt my best and i will work to edit it, thanks for your honesty...If you liked that poem you may enjoy " I hate you, But I love you" It is one of my favorites that i have written.
Keep up the work.
-Ashley.

A perfect exampl of how drink can effect people. Consuming them so that they are no longer just drinking to forget their problems but also to forget they have a drink problem. Well written. I like it :-)

Great poem! keep writing! thanks for the comment on mine!
hannah

WOW, this is excellent! Great expression and it flows so beautifully! Fantastic write! I love it!

Thank you for the comment. much appriciated.. and good work too.

Thank you for the comment. much appriciated.. and good work too.

Great poem, flow is ok capitalize the first word in each line. Just warning you I got told that too many times so I finally did.
~~Sweetie

Wow, this poem is wondeful, so powerful and full of meanings.

Thanks for the comments on my poems, I am glad you took the time to read and comment on my poem.

xxxMeg

Wow, ur such a good writer... i duno what to say... that was amazing...

Great piece! very strong! keep it up. and keep your head up! stay strong! take care and thanks for the comment!

Beautiful..so much emotion shines through this poem..beautifully written and quit insperational..well done

Exellent. 5/5 it had a lot of emotion in it, and i truly loved it. thanks for the comment on my poem broken.

Really good work. the message really comes through! I like the flow too

That Was So Sad! But I Loved It! It Was Simply Brilliant And Im Overly Impressed 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo