The Emo Girl's Suicide

by AnorexicDream   Dec 6, 2005


With bruises
on her face and on her arms
with cuts up her wrist
you can tell she self harms

she isn't smart
hair is a dark black
she is depressed
and thats a fact

she never comes to school
with short sleeves on
you can tell all her hope
has been gone

she never sleeps
cause they are always yelling
but her it will get better
to herself she keeps telling

with a suicide note in hand
and i knife in the other
shes ready to make an attempt
then in walks her brother

telling her that everything is all her fault
that he hopes she dies
she does what he says
she looks at him and says so do i

he was just upset
daddy had just hit him again
but she began to make that long cut
to soon end her pain

she looked up
as her mom stood there
she just walked away
without a single care

she began to cut
more and more
then there was her father
standing right as the door

he walked in
and looked at her arms
he began to hit her
to give her more harm

he beat her so bad
that she couldn't even move you see
that night she finally killed herself
this emo girl's suicide will one day be me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wow really gr8 poem! that is like a perfect poem..one of the best...5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by SingleWing

    Wow thats rele good. One of the best Ive read. Im not sure if the last part is my favourite of least favourite (it's so shockin and yet so sad). Is this rele you?

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Aww hun, i really don't know what to say. don't give up on life, you just never know what it has reserved for you. take care and stay strong. *hugs tightly*
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by alyssa

    If u do it i do it remember that amanda

    i love you

    alyssa

  • 19 years ago

    by Alicia

    Thats really deep...i wish i could put my feelings down as well as you do...keep up the good work