Aawww thats ace dude, it kinda sad though

Sad, but a great poem. It shows a time period that anyone could go through, about knowing that their last day is coming up. It teaches us to live life to the fullest, and that is a great moral. Great job, and keep on writing.

Aww it's so sweet and sad.. Good though =) xxx

Hey wel dis one was gwd its sad *cris* lol but rory dnt lyk it to bad lol coz i did lol

Very Good! Hang in there though, Don't let things bring you down, you have a lot ahead of u.

I'm crying... literally... I don't think I've ever gotten this emotional over a poem. But, there's this girl who got in a car accident not too long ago, and she's been in the hospital ever since. So I know that this was very possibly her last Christmas, and it seems like this is exactly what she'd been writing. Wow... thanks so much for sharing that, cause I really needed to read it. Sorry I'll stop talking now =)

Wonderful poem!!!! very nicely written 5/5