Closed Casket...

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


Her soul is filled with pain
Cut her wrist and make them bleed

She is suffering, such misery
She is lonely inside her body

You can't see what she doesn't tell
It's all a big secret now

Locked up inside her cold dark hell
She was told this would all be over soon

It wasn't soon enough
She is very impatient, didn't you know

Stop staring at her
She isn't some show

Close it now, she doesn't want that
Close the casket, don't let them see her face

She is to much of a disgrace
To the whole complete world

6 feet underground
Where she's felt like she's been before

This time she doesn't have to try anymore
To make her way out

It's easy now
No more pain to go through

She's gone

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    The format of this one is much better. The emotion is really strong and raw and the imagery is great.

    Stop staring at her
    She isn't some show

    Those lines really stood out to me. and the ending was really powerful.
    Great poem keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    This is such an excellent poem.. you did a very nice job..

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    This was a really good poem but at the begining your rhyming didnt start till like the third stanza but other then that it was a really good poem i loved reading it great job.

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This one was really good. There was a lot of emotion and the lines didn't seemed forced. I enjoyed reading it.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    I really feel for you you have a lot of things going through your mind thanks for sharing them love the work

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