Great poem, I love it soo much. The way you write is unique and I like it. Never stop showing your feelings.
~~Sweetie

I really feel for you you have a lot of things going through your mind thanks for sharing them love the work

This one was really good. There was a lot of emotion and the lines didn't seemed forced. I enjoyed reading it.
5/5

This was a really good poem but at the begining your rhyming didnt start till like the third stanza but other then that it was a really good poem i loved reading it great job.

This is such an excellent poem.. you did a very nice job..

The format of this one is much better. The emotion is really strong and raw and the imagery is great.

Stop staring at her
She isn't some show

Those lines really stood out to me. and the ending was really powerful.
Great poem keep it up.