Please don't do this, I don't know if you want to or not. But before you even think about it think about your other poem we f u c k i n g loved you!!
~~Sweetie

Nice, though the rhyming was a bit scatterd. i imagine thats because of the porblem you had with spcaes. a good solid poem. well done

Ruby

Very good poem, wrote very well.

It is agood solid poem although as you say the spacinng is a little off but actually that is something I quite like about it. The rhyme scheme is alittle wonky annd that kinda rocks the flow a bit but otherwise it is a nice solid write.