Why? When?

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


Why do the thoughts over power the feelings?
Why does hatred feel better than love?
When will these secrets be revealed?
When will I be able to rise above?

Why am I in such a deep dark place?
When will the emotions be replaced?
Why doesn\'t anything help me out?
When will I beable to live without doubt?

Why am I so emotionally troubled?
When wil my happiness level come back and double?
Why doesn\'t anyone see the severity?
When will I be able to see and think with clarity?

Why won\'t all of this end?
When did it all frucking being?
Why am I frucking like this?
When\'s the time for me to just finally not exsist?

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  • 18 years ago

    by lost_laureate

    Oh such misery did this poem radiate. I find it so sad when you are so upset and the questions just keep coming.

    Liked these lines...

    "Why doesn't anyone see the severity?
    When will I be able to see and think with clarity?"

    When suffering comes the first thing we do it to question it. I think you structured the poem quite considering it consisted of rhetorical questions...to improve it maybe think more about some of the questions you are asking and not repeat similar ideas too much. Ask questions that cannot help but affect and address the reader....

    Good stuff...
    [lostlaureate - come find me]

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Wow...A poem to which i can relate
    So many unanswerable questions
    xxxx keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    A few spelling mistakes but other then that great poem. You always seem to show your feelings and thats so awsome.
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    We have a lot in common.
    I love this poem.
    5/5

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