I don't Understand

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


I don't understand my feelings
I can't even see straight

Escaping reality
Is the best thing that can happen to me

Drugs,alcohol, whatever it may be
It's worth everything to feel free

Why do you always yell at me?
Accuse me of things you have no idea about

I'm really sick of all you shhit
I really wish you would open your eyes, look and see what's going on with me

I hate everything about myself and everything around
I really wish I could just duck my head under the deep cold water and drown

My life's frucked up , but it's really just me
Every minute I'm alive is a wasted minute of death

People lie, I cry, Then I die, Goodbye

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  • 18 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    I can totally relate!! i love this poem!! =]]

  • 18 years ago

    by Moose

    Not as clear as it could of been. It seemed as if you were trying to make multiple points throughout the poem. And the flow was a little off, especially near the end of the poem. Bout the last 2-3 stanzas were a little off from the rest. Other than that good poem and very emotional. 4/5

    Yours truly
    Bryce

  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen~Tears

    I liked it.. But the rhyme scheme was a little off.. might wanna look into that.. anyways good job..

    ~!*FallenTears~!*
    ~!*Meaghen~!*

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I really liked it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    Keep hanging in there, life will get better. You will find that someone to make everything worth it. Great poem. 5/5