by ~*~Morgan~*~ Dec 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I don't understand my feelings |
I can totally relate!! i love this poem!! =]] |
by Moose
Not as clear as it could of been. It seemed as if you were trying to make multiple points throughout the poem. And the flow was a little off, especially near the end of the poem. Bout the last 2-3 stanzas were a little off from the rest. Other than that good poem and very emotional. 4/5 |
by Fallen~Tears
I liked it.. But the rhyme scheme was a little off.. might wanna look into that.. anyways good job.. |
by Allison
I really liked it. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Lexie
Keep hanging in there, life will get better. You will find that someone to make everything worth it. Great poem. 5/5 |