by Samantha
This poem seems to have come from you heart... it was well written.. very nice... i know how you feel... dont worry in time things do get better and they do work out... lots of love |
by avery
I'm having a "problem" with my emotions too. |
by Princess09
Good poem again full of emotion and feeling. I hope you don't feel like this because life is such a beautiful thing. Try and focus on the good, even if it is hard and I know it can be. |
by Richard
This sia wesome short but meaningful i give u 5/5 i love the idea about ppl really not seeing whats there and just judging |
Great poem. I really like this part: |
by Tim Bradshaw
Wow your poems are really deep i hope everything goes well with your situation |
Your right we do have alot in common. I loved this poem. it's like your always running yet your in the same place |
by Lexie
Keep hanging in there, life will get better. You will find that someone to make everything worth it. Great poem. 5/5 |
by Allison
I really liked it. Keep up the good work. *5/5* |
by Fallen~Tears
I liked it.. But the rhyme scheme was a little off.. might wanna look into that.. anyways good job.. |
by Moose
Not as clear as it could of been. It seemed as if you were trying to make multiple points throughout the poem. And the flow was a little off, especially near the end of the poem. Bout the last 2-3 stanzas were a little off from the rest. Other than that good poem and very emotional. 4/5 |
I can totally relate!! i love this poem!! =]] |