by Matthew A. Dec 6, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Everyday when you happen to walk by, |
Wow that was rly kewl..keep up the great new styles of writing..xxLISSA |
by just a poet
U r very talented. this poem brings acros an emotion that is different top norm poems, u have a gd rhyuming scheme. i dont think i'll ever understand a guy, u dont say hi because u like her thats ubderstandble but u should try to show her how u feel. i no this guy is like that cept dont no about the pain bit. he never say hi to me and then says it and runs away but i dont think he likes me. newy im going on again. wel take care. |
Seriously...your rhyming is cool...you are good from the beginning...and you keeps getting better...you are one talented poet...believe me...you are amazing... |
by Amy
Aww..actually, I think this is my favorite one..nice work :) |
Awww speach less just in awww omg get poem 5/5 |