Comments : The marks that lay upon me

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    It is really hard to be original when you comment on the same persons poems and a lot of them. I try to be but it is complicated since usually poeple make certain mistakes and thats it. You are a great poet and all you need to do is add punctuation.
    ~~Sweetie

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Another good one your pretty good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Tim Bradshaw

    Another good one your pretty good keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Exellent, it's so deep!

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Its simple yet deep i liked it :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nici

    Short and to the point still managing to get your message across.

    Keep writing
    Nici

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Omg...i can totally relate. excellent poem. i loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Again...i can relate. i've just started cutting again...this poem describes cutting all so well...keep up the good work...i loved this poem.