Im all alone, with people surronding me

by ~*~Morgan~*~   Dec 6, 2005


I'm not myself anymore
It's like I've just closed the door

On everyone and everything
It's probably better this way

No more pain hurt and lies
But then why do i always cry

My empty soul eats me from within
When did all of this being?

My fear and pain is all inside
And all I know how to do is hide

It's like I'm in a dream
Then waking to reality

A slap in the face
To realize I'm all alone

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very expressive peice, not sure if there was meant to be a rhyme scheme or not as there are rhymes but doesn't seem to be a regla scheme... but that is my only critism as the content, flow and structure are all fantastic.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    I know how this feels. When I went to high school people were around me all the time and yet I felt nothing but loneliness. Its hard find someone you can talk to and care about and theyll make it better.
    ~~Sweetie

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