I know how this feels. When I went to high school people were around me all the time and yet I felt nothing but loneliness. Its hard find someone you can talk to and care about and theyll make it better.
~~Sweetie

Very expressive peice, not sure if there was meant to be a rhyme scheme or not as there are rhymes but doesn't seem to be a regla scheme... but that is my only critism as the content, flow and structure are all fantastic.

5/5