Wow, this is real gud! It actually made me cry, it;s like exactly how i feel sometimes! keep up the gud work!
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This was good, not good I mean the poem was good the meaning was sad though well I think you know what I mean 20/5

Brilliant peice, so much feeling and expresion in it. the only thing is thatt with it been set out the way it is it seems very daunting when first loooked at, might be better set out in stanza on that front. but the peices content itself is brilliant.