by Torn
Aww huni:'(!!! |
by Aleesha
Wow you are so talented. That is a fantastic poem i really like it. Top job thanks luv leesh xo |
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Oh huni, thankyou so much for your comment...your words, unlike others mean so much...you are amazingly talented and inspirational. i hope that you fully recover from your cutting and everything else... you sound like a beautiful person... thankyou once again, all my love, liv xx p.s. this poem was amazing. take care |
U r an amazing writter... i love all your poems... i love the way you rite, u r a awesome chick!! from ur poems i can c u r kind, and caring... ur very talented!!! keep up the work... ur an amazing, beautifull person... i wish there was more ppl like u aronud!! |
by Leona
WOW this an amazing poem, And i hope one day i will be half as good at writing poems Thank You for sharing |
Lovely poem. very inspirational and it brought tears to my eyes! http://www.poetictimes.com/poem/New/Broken_Angel.html?id=47260 there is the link you asked for. if you wanna know what happened between me and James just ask me! hehe! *hugs tight* love you babe! |
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Erm...well first everything was fine, but then we got into a fight and he had his sister email me saying that he commited suicide which, i put the blame on myself. but then...like a month later, i talk to his GF finding that he is alive and well. i loved him so much, and he betrayed me, and though he did that to me, i'm still in love with him. he's the guy that i compare every other guy to. i know he's in pain right now and it kills me. i just wanted him to know that i do know about his bad side..thats why i wrote the response poem. |
by Bill Turner
Beautifully written poem. I want to thank you for sharing with me, in the comments on my poem. I spent my entire life keeping people at arms length and the one time I let someone in, I get hurt. I am prepared to go back to locking everyone out. I probably won't because I never really lived until this last year, but I also never felt until this year either. Life doesn't come with a user manual or training wheels. Kinda sucks sometimes but it beats the alternative. |
by Jason Kramer
That was very touching.... reminds me of my friend who put on a mask to hide from everybody too stupid to see that she was festering on the inside. |
by evangeline
This poem was incredible! I wouldn't normally enjoy the rhyming pattern but well it was intruiging and fascinating from any perspective, and completely understandable. Love it! |
by J Lau
Lovely poem... nicely done. 5/5 |