Good poem, use more spacing and/or punctuation , it would make it easier to read and it would flow better. you kinda get jumbled up reading it , if your not the writer. because you know what your trying to say and what your poem is saying. we dont. spaces and such help seperate thoughts and feelings more than you think. none the less i loved the poem.

Omg i love it it is fantastic! i can feel the anger pain and hate