by avery
It's great that you've decided to do that. |
by Firooz
Are you gonna leaveup with the right one and hang out with an other??,,,,,,, suspencezzzzzzzzzz:-? |
This is a great poem! I know exactly how you feel. I can relate to this a lot. Excellent. 5/5. |
by Mezmeryz
Hey a great write again..i yhink that is really sweet and nice to see your moving on!:) |
I have read this poem a few times already...and I havent commented on it bcus I was trying to understand it. Not that I dont understand the poem, ma. I know what its about, and its well done. I loved it. Every single word. Its just that I find myself in the same situation. And I dont know if I could just give up like you did.I cant just let go. And you know who I am talkin about. Now I dont need to...because he asked me back out. I guess what I am trying to say ma is that I am scared to forget him, and I am so glad that you can. |
by Syn
I like it alot... and in it i sense great power in your words. im going to add you to my favorites. |
Im glad you liked the poem ma...And I AM happy for you....Just live the moment. Hold on to him.... forget about the past and plunge in to the future...Let him go, and hold on to TRUE love....cause mami, why do you think they call it "First Love" ;There is always a second .... |
by Becky
Wow this must have been hard for you to write but then again at the same time i bet it was a bit of a relief. I admire your strength and courage to actually stop writing poesm about him and to put him behind you, i wish i could do the same. |
by behun
Brave enough! good for you....... |