Comments : Lie to me

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    We hope we can accept those lies...and live with it...but sometimes...things just not going to be that way...ehem...I don't know if what I'm saying has something to do with this poem lol...it just came to my mind...well..it's quite good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    What a wonderful poem Steph. I am sorry I didn't notice it early, I must have missed it somehow. It's very beautiful writin. I love it.

    I am sorry to hear that (what you said in the comment on my poem). It must be very hard for you. I wish I could do something for you. I just wish I could hun. I will think of you and light some candles for you (in front of my budha). It's not that I am religieus. It's just my way to think of someone and pray for them. I love you, take care sweety -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan Michaud

    Hey hun! I love this poem!!! It's sooo good and I really love the way u wrote it, like with the "lie to me" sentences before the other lines, it's great! oxoxo~Meg

  • 18 years ago

    by XTaintedxBeautyX

    Simply amazing.. love the way its written. i can relate to this poem

  • "So i disappear with the illusion that those words are true"
    gorgeous. and thanx for the comment! wow, beautiful write, reminds me of something i would have written

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