Excellent poem! I like the title, it fits perfectly. I also love how you repeated "why am I so lonely", overall a powerful poem, not cheesy at all!

Aw hun this is so sad, I can definetly relate to this poem right now, the last verse made me sad cause it is definetly how i feel & i just realised a few things about the person that I love also, he doesent love me..well anyways, great work again, and thank you for commenting on my poem take care

LOVVVVVVVVE it it shows ur true feelings!!!!! EXCELLENT.....xxLISSA

I've... felt like that... yea... 5/5, i like it

LOVE IT! you are an amazing writer, keep but the good work and I'll read more of them!
Juls

Nice job, Great ending, keep it up

Gr8 work...luv the ending....ur an excellent writer...or and the one i commented earlier it was supposed 2 b..~*Who Cares?*~ as my signature not the other thing so sry...neway 5/5 again
~*Who Cares?*~

I liked it, it was really good lol and it wasnt cheesy! And I guess you can say I've felt like that but anyways very good poem, keep up the good work! :D