Other great poem! I'm glad you told me to read your work, it seems like it comes from the heart. good work
juls

Your right they are alik, this poem is really good I love the ending

I like this poem not only cause it relates to soo many situations in life but it speaks for not only yourself but for other people. I like a poem everyone can relate to... I hope you and the person in the poem end up working it out.. they wood of had to of been pretty special to hav a poem written about them

I can see how this was one of your most painful poems my faviort line was "no one can win, beacuse this situation is a lose-lose" so true (I will be here till the end of next week then I gone for awhile) -with all my love
Cody

Wow this is very touching =*( I can imagine it hurts to write something like this.

It's beautifully written and I love the sad story it tells.

Very well done sweety

Lotsaaaa love
-xxx-