God this is amazing, grabbed me from the beginning to the end.....You have done it again sweety =0) Just hope that you will feel better soon, that you won't feel so alone...I am always here for you if you ever need a shoulder to cry on, just let me know...Truely a masterpiece... |
by Ashley Lynn
Hey gurl! love the poem. keep it up. |
by ScarletHaze
Amazing hun but you shudnt just bury your own pain xox |
Tina... this poem can only be described in one way... A-M-A-Z-I-N-G |
by Hayley
I really like this, its basically how i live my life my favorite lines are these: |
I love this poem, i can see your a good person, you just hurt, pain is apart of life but no one should live alone |
This poem is so nice. i really like it. it just says a lot and it has a lot of meannings, that's very nice. |
I will let you be anything you want to...nice poem hun...I love it...great to see a poem from you again... |
by Kathrynn
That is amazing.. |
by anasha
Thats was brilliant ...its amazing how u wrote it ... nice work darl |
by Torn
One of the best poems that i have ever read. I know how you feel, so much that it hurts. |
by Charlotte
Hiya darlin i love your poem it is gr8 but you shoukdn't just bury how you feel and your pain even tho its harder than what people say |
Oh wow hun, this is so great!! I love it all! 5/5 forsure! |
Wow. That sounds a lot like my life. I am the person all my friends come to for help and adivice, but none of them understand how much I need it myself. I am trying to quit cutting and going through major withdrawl and no one knows but me. I really love this poem. 10/5! |
by JL
Wow its almost as if you're writing about me. I love the end its so true. take care and stay strong. XXXXX |
by broken angel
I absolutely love it, it's so strong. It is amazing, I can't think of any other words to tell you how...perfect this poem is. Excellent, EXCELLENT job! |
Beautiful thoughts, and words. I have a poem like this...I know what you're feeling! This is truely one to be proud of! |
by *Rachel*
Love this!!! how i felt wen da lad i like was kinda suicidal! gd job!!!! |
by ..eliSa*
Every line in this poem i can relate to..i am always that person looking out for others. im always trying to help the people around me make the right decisions, and chase away their fears and discard of all their sadness, but the truth is-i myslef am the one with the problems and i never show my tears and my disguise has always been on..readign this has made me re evaluate my thinking and maybe i should get help..maybe for once i should put myself before others..well enough of me talkign to my inner self lol..a beautiful poem-very well written..i thank you for writting a poem that i can relate too..trully a job well done..keep it up! |
Wow.. this poem is amazing! |