Wow, awsome poem. has alot of emotion and is so true in so many cases.

~Joe~

OMG this is sooo awesome you really hit a spot for me.... each word had a sentance behind it this poetry is so clear to me, u r da bomb.... after all *Tears are what the heart can't say*

WOOOOW!!so touching!thanks for commenting on my poem,just thought i'd return the favour.im guessing this is about ur dad or mum??well whoever it is,stay strong,try speaking up cos after all ur parents luv u!!okies keep smiling!!xxx

That was great I loved that poem keep up the good work!!!!!

Great poem!!

THis is so sad, it made me feel like I was going to cry, outstanding poem, you put loads of emotion and feeling and heart into your poem, it was not too long and had so much to say and each line was full of meaning!!!