by AmbientBlack Dec 7, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Dreamt of white rainbows, flickering desire, in the window of majesty, there burned yon fire... |
A extremely well written poem, look forward to reading some more of your work. |
I really like your writing style on this-archaic yet so poetic, harkening back to a different era.The rhyme scheme is subtle and the whole piece flows nicely, but it is the emotion and images that really are outstanding-fantastic imagery.This is simply beautiful in every way.Very impressive and touching.Really great poem. |