Dear Mom...

by Sarah Ashley   Dec 7, 2005


Dear Mom...

Where were you when I first learned to ride my bike?
When I met the first guy i ever really liked
When i got my very first Teddy bear
Did you ever even really care?
Ya you gave me a few birthday gifts
but where were you when i learned to play my first guitar riff?
Where were you when I broke my wrist
Or when i got my very first kiss
All of these importent things you missed
My first steps, my first word
you never even heard
My first laugh, my first cry
All these things just passed you by
I bet your always their to wipe your other daughters tears
chase away all of her fears
as loving to her as you can be
but you were never their for me
They say actions speak louder than words
words from you I have not heard
It's these actions that i judge you by
Twelve years of my life was one big lie
I have never heard form you
No not one hello
no I love yous so it must not be so
All i have is a picture and a birthday card
so pushing you out of my life shouldn't be to hard
because you were never there
Now tell me why should I care?

From
~The daughter you could of had

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  • 18 years ago

    by James

    WOW....this is really deep and emotional you done an excellent job of writing this, Great job wish i could write like that :) 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~Morgan~*~

    Thats a great poems, spaces to seperate some thoughts would be a little helpful, but not a must. keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by cowgurlsweetie

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh this is so sad, I feel your pain! It's beautifully written with honesty and I love it! Great job!