The Puppeteer

by Once an Angel   Dec 7, 2005


Taking the strings, loving the strands,
of the marionettes carved by your hand.

They are your creation, a part of you,
Each design and carving you shaped too.

You gave them direction, guided every step,
In your absolute control their bodies were kept

Things went completely as you had planned,
Telling them when to sit and when to stand.

However, now the question remains, the one never asked,
what if the positions were switched, and you wore the puppet mask.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    I think there was a little "hiccup" in the last line. "If you -were- the puppet mask"?
    If you -wore- the puppet mask?

    But the poem I truly loved.
    Every line seemed to fit perfectly. I can never seem do that.
    Brilliant!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Love it. Hasn't been the first idea like this, but you wrote a very original form with a great twist to think about.
    Nice poem..u rock
    xoxo