5/5

I like your use of the poems name in the last sentence, it helps make the poem relevent. The ryhming and stanza's are all constant and flowing, and your use of words are simple yet effective [to me it sounds like it was the first time this person expeirienced love, I'm not sure if that was meant or an accident ^^;]

Nice poem, this is the first I've read currently [the title grabbed my attention when I was looking through your profile] but I'm looking to read more.

Thankyou for your comments ^^

I can relate to that and i like it good poem

Nice poem...enjoyed ur choice of words and how it all flowed together...loved it...