This poem is good....its about david right i can tell it is...damn its a trip how she just broke up with him like that i thought they would last but i guess i was wrong....well its a good poem

Great poem, a very sweet write! Excellent!

Awesome poem...I loved every word of it...even thought it is very sad...I hope that he is ok....Thank you for commenting on my Poem....Thanks..Love Joclyn

You are getting better day by day...your rhyming skills has turn from good to great...man...this is fantastic...