Will we ever stop the pain?

Great poem, you're talented, no doubt about that. I can only say, what the others already did, great rhyme, simple but still strong,
simply perfect
dwight

This poem is awsome. So simple yet so strong. It holds so much meaning. Keep writing, luv riffy xxxx

Simple again but still extremely well written with a beautiful rhyming pattern. I really loved this one. Great job!

-Mikochan

That was really fantastic. I really liked the way you wrote this one. I loved the
beginning and also this part:
This world is filled with harsh goodbyes
Bleeding hearts seen through Stying eyes.
Knuckles bruised and teeth knocked
out
words that where left to scream about.

you're very talented. keep it up.
much love and happiness,
marjan

So true, but so sad! I like your choice of words, beautifully written!