Hi Billy well 1st of all wow this poem is really sad but is so true i guess it can only get better right?!?! Well i just read all 11 of your poems and seriously u truly have a talent for writing them and for the way u use yur words no lie.. All of your poems are perfect i loved each and everyone... I also loved they way u write about da girl dat u love... that's so sweet any girl would be proud to have u... I gave you 5/5 in all ur poems no lie u deserved those points... I hope u keep writing like this i love ur work keep it up 5/5 always keep writing.... take care ciao... =)