by Donavin Dec 7, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
What’s The Point For Me To Wake Up In The Morning?… |
by Donavin
Lol ok... so wat poetic beauty?¿? lol |
WOW..my love you are a beautiful writer...Love YOu Always..Joclyn |
I have been reading some of your poems and I really like some, they are written well and have a good message. However, there are also ones like this one, where they have a good message, but are lacking on the poetic beauty. You have a lot to say, and the ability to say it well, I just think maybe you could put that into all your poems. I really like them though, please don't be insulted, it's just an idea. ^ _~ |
by Carrie
Aww.. this is sad.. I hope things get better for you... |