A line a day.

by Natasha   Dec 7, 2005


I wonder why death screamed at you, repeatedly calling your name.
I wonder why you had to leave, leaving me in the rain.

I wonder what went through your head, why you left me in the cold.
I wonder why you gave up love, and lost your heart of gold.

I wonder why you cry at night, why singing no longer works,
I wonder if you thought of that, I wonder what's the worst.

You used to say you thought of me, when you had been away.
But this time it seems to me, that away is where you'll stay.

I wonder if you feel complete, now that your life has gone.
I wonder if you can finaly sleep, and wake up during dawn.

I wonder if you feel the music, calling you like the night.
I wonder if you can be at peace, and no longer have to fight.

I wonder if you are happy now, while I am all alone.
I wonder if you're doing good, and lost you mind of stone...

*right the idea of this poem, is for me to write down a line every day... you know don't rush it.
I usually just come in to submit poems and write something down... I wanted to try something new. once it is finished I will post the entire of it as new... in the meantime, I wonder if you have some title suggestions?? well, thnX =)*

~* TasH *~

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  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Well if i suggest u the title then u hv to put half of the votes which this poem will get in my bank....i m sure with this start that even half will make me reach the top.. :o)

    well great start dear...regarding the title..i think i'll wait as the continuity has to be seen within the stanzas and also the theme.. till then
    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    I think your doing great so far....I will get back to you later on title sugestions . 5/5