Sadness

by RadianceInReverse   Dec 7, 2005


Sadness
complete destitute
no help no way out
I'm just gonna sit here resolute
my eyes full of tears
this is one of my worst fears
Death
has taken you away
why did u have to go, and not stay
Broken
from the pain
thats driving me insane
My Heart
has floated away
there is nothing left in me today
Depression

I'm trying a new format of writing...please comment..Thanks Joclyn

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Your a great writer in my eyes. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Very good .... keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very intersting poem....the way it was written intrigues me....I would really like to read more like this....lataz

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Nice job pretty lady. Like the new format and you should continue to write more like this and thanks for the comments.

    ~Matt~

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    O0oh...nice...new format? Well...it's cool...

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