Aw omg this is so cute, the last verse made me cry, aw, so sad, lovely well done my dear, great work, take care and keep on writing love poems i love them!

Hmm...wait a minute...r u saying u wrote this while u r in class...when u r not paying attention? If u did...man...I can't say anything more...u r just great....this poem is cool...

I like this poem alsooooo haha and i still can't believe your 12! you use such sopisticated words... its insane.. i love your writinggggg lol ... im adding you to my favorite poet thing!
xo adge

Lol wow, if this you jsut wrote in class im amazed i have written quite many in class and never have they been this good, like seriously you are the most amazing writer like i know lol,i love how there is so much emotion behind this poem its great, to me thats what makes a poem is emotion,

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Omg...amazing i love it!! wow ur a gr8 poet. im definately ading u to my favs. wow keep em coming i really enjoyed them. and good luck with that one you love, im in love too and it feels gr8!! i hope ur livin life good. bye gr8 poem!! gotta give it a 5!!

Diana

Lol. wow matt i love you. and i love it. i actually am getting what you are writing. awesome. i rate it a 5 :-p

Really cool. It takes me a while to right a poem. Plus use big words, I have a small vocabulary, lol. great though 5/5

Omg it's so beautiful and emotional! And how do you are able to write such a romantic poem when Maths stuff or something is the only thing you hear in your background?!? Very impressive!!!!