If These Walls Could Talk

by Cuddles   Dec 7, 2005


If these walls could talk they'd tell a story
of a girl who dreamed big but never felt the glory.
If these walls could talk they'd tell about a girl
who once made a boy her whole world.
If these walls could talk they'd tell of a lost romance,
of a broken heart, of a girl that never stood a chance.
If these walls could talk they'd tell of a time
when a girl would pray "Lord, I wish he were mine".
If these walls could talk they'd tell of a young girl's life
where her only dream was to become this boy's wife.
If these walls could talk then maybe you'd see
that the young girl who dreamed big was none other than me.

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very nicely done. once again i'm very impressed at your skills. definately natural talent. I know ur profile requests critique, adn normally i'm a vey cruel adn honest person when it comes to judging, but this is pretty darn good. Well written.

    Suzie
    P.S. I totally agree with ur idea that life=poetry. It's very intelligent adn very true in so many ways.

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i can relate i loved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Aw, its really sad. i promise though if you want thin gs to improve they will. be strong girl honestly there is someone out there for you, and you can be happy if you want to
    sammi morris

  • 18 years ago

    by PrincessCatalina

    GREAT JOB! keep up the great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Malenda

    Absolutley beautiful even though alot of people didnt cooment one this poem i still will if the walls in my room could talk they would say a whole lot

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