Omg I can relate to this so much... AMAZING job... can't even begin to describe how much I love this!

Absolutley beautiful even though alot of people didnt cooment one this poem i still will if the walls in my room could talk they would say a whole lot

GREAT JOB! keep up the great work!

Aw, its really sad. i promise though if you want thin gs to improve they will. be strong girl honestly there is someone out there for you, and you can be happy if you want to
sammi morris

Great poem i can relate i loved it!!!

Very nicely done. once again i'm very impressed at your skills. definately natural talent. I know ur profile requests critique, adn normally i'm a vey cruel adn honest person when it comes to judging, but this is pretty darn good. Well written.

Suzie
P.S. I totally agree with ur idea that life=poetry. It's very intelligent adn very true in so many ways.