Wow i like your choice of words... this poem is extremly well written... in my opionion the best thing about this poem is how well it flows... at first glance it looks confusing but after i read it i had to read it again and again thats how beautiful it was... nice work...

sammie

Wow I like it, the flow is good, it expresses many points and is a nice read. I love how the stanzas link so well. Awesome message about christmas and not realising the actual point is celebrating christs coming to be. And the ending and the word selfishness just lock together so well. Great job.

I loved it, i like ur style very much is so unique u've got ur own way of expressing feelings and putting them into words, i just think it's awsome lol i didn't understand a few words cuz i learned english at school ^^

adioS!

pili

Wow...this was really good...theres nuthin 2 say but wunderful work...nuthin rong with this poem....keep up the gr8 work....5/5 4 sure!!

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This is an incredible write Drew, flowed really nicely, magnificent write, must say, and thanks for the comment.