Another day goes on,
another day among.
Another day I don't have you in my arms,
Another day you cause me harm.
Another day that you don't love me,
Another day I want to cry and scream.
Another day when I wish you would love me as I love you,
Another day wasted because I'm a fool
Another day without you,
Another day loving you.
I really liked this poem. I thought that it had really great flow. It was kinda short but that was good because you got straight to the point without making it too long. Overall very nice job!!!