Omg that made me cry.. because if ur poem is true. thats exactly how i feel..i love this poem..

Omg wow... this poem... i pray for you that it is not true because i had to go through that to... this was well written and flowed beautifully... very nice job... you made me cry, that dosent happen often...

sammie

Awww Haily, beautifully written hun, you will never lose your talent. I hope you are doing well, make sure we keep in touch some time. Take care!!!

Thanx for all the comments everyone! And yes sadly it is a true story.....

~*Much Love.....Haily

Ohh haily, that was sad but oh so beautiful!!!! Its good to see that at least your putting your hurt into poems.........it was a great read (almost made me cry,i admit) loved it!!!If you ever need to talk i'm here = )
luv jess xoxo

It sounds really scary, i hope things are better or will soon be better.
great poem though, i'll igve it a 5

sammi x

Very sad and very well written.. great job!

Great poem, very expressive and well writen

Great poem sad but still really good I can't really relate because my dad was never really there in the first place however I still liked it alot.

Wow hun thats such a sad and painful poem to read that just makes me want to cry it such to have to live like that i hope things get better for you maybe you should talk to someone about it nice poem keep it up 5.5

That is such a well written poem! I look forward to reading more of your poems.
-Kristin

Beautiful.

Omg this poem is amazing and so good it is wo like true so much emotion , this is really good especially for not having wrote in a long time,

lots of love
*~*Becky*~*

Ohh My God, this sounds just like my life, when I lived at home with my parents...My dad use to get so mad and I was the one he pushed around, but never ever once did he said he was sorry....I am so sorry that you have to go through this, just be strong okay!! If you ever need some one to talk with, I am here for you...

Much love Sabina

OMGOSH haily i never knew ur dad did that last year or this year. i'm so sry. i hope ur ok and everything else is. i hope this never happens again. im reali sry. well its a great poem. i liked it even though it was/is true. well im always here to talk. u know my # and where i live. hope ur ok and all gets better. keep em' up. they r great. love ya always,
♥Ashleigh Sue♥

This is so sad. So well written. I hope you're okay....

heidi b