Wow, I should have my ex girl read this...then maybe she'd get the point that I dont tolerate cheaters or liars... awesome yo, keep it up. Eternal, -MC-

You pretty much just got this message clearly across. You can't stand this other person, whoever they are. Great job, short and straight to the point! I liked it! 5/5

Stephanie

Haha, well you definitely got the message across, didn't you?

This was interesting. It wasn't AMAZING. It could do with a few touch ups, but overall was very interesting. I liked it.

Nice poem, one I wouldn't mind reciting to a few people :) Anyways great poem, you've made it on my favourites - Very talented 5/5.