The subject of this poem is AMAZING really really good!!! I don't think its been done before so GO YOU!! It was beautiful and i can tell its from the heart. A definite *thumbs up* lol
luv jess xoxo

Wow. what a love filled poem , It all went together so nicely.It would be the best thing ever to go back and re-live some parts of life and fix all mistakes, to bad it doesn't work that way. like i said great poems keep it up
~april~

Hey, cute poem. Add more punctuation (,.?!) helps the reader know what pace to read at!!
~~Sweetie

I could feel your emotions as I read every line.. Great job in writing this, hun. Do write more and I'll keep reading... =)