My Love

by Letty   Dec 8, 2005


Your eye's are like the star's that shine in the night .

your smile is like a bright burst of light that out-shines the sun. But when were apart it doesn't shine .

Your hand's are like soft cushioned pillow's that only I can rest my head on at night, and have sweet dream's about you holding me tight .

In your arm's I belong, and forever wrapped in your smile . What can I say More ?........

I like your style .

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  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I love how you ended it

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥*Jodie*♥

    Gr8 peom exactly my feeling s to the love of my life, u can only put ait inot words as the rest is so hard to express. u made this clear that love really cant totally be expressd. and i ove the funny bit on the end about his style 10 out of 10 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    You had some real sweet stuff in here... very nice write... try to stay a little more steady with you capitlization... other than that nice work... keep it up!

    sammie