I've read this poem a couple of times over, before I could completly memorize it.
I think this poem is written with a lot of emotion, and the feelings are genuine.. therefor I can't really say a negative thing about it.
I rated you a 4. because I hardly ever rate higher.... It's good work and I feel you need to keep on writing :)

take care,
~* TasH *~

Well wat can i say