Comments : You Deserve

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    A heartfelt piece! beautifully written!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sexy Guy ~ Sexier than ever!!!

    Nice one! sammi agrees!!! :)
    please read my poem THE HEART it is really beautiful i promise :)
    sexy guy

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    "You deserve more than anyone's best,
    More than life has to give,
    You deserve everything and more,
    A happy and romantic life to live."

    this was my fave bit:)
    ur so talented keep it up.

    5/5
    nami