Comments : Take Me Back To My Childhood

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...you have improve in such a short time...this is good...I love it...and hmm...yeah...it's just human nature lol...that's it..

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Hi dear,

    human nature- i wish people had the depth of understanding that you do... I can see this poem taking place in my own life. It was touching and left me with sweet feelings of my past... happy and sad... great job.... i loved it... as usual, you're really talented..

    Much Love,
    Ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by Dumpstead

    Nice concept. You could make the flow much better. The relation b/w the stanzas can be improved.

    And don't worry about the length. My poem called "WORDS" is phqing 3 times bigger than this and I never thought it was long.

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hi nitin

    well this was a nice one. u did a great job. u told me that u will write 1 on childhood and u did it. well done.
    take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Jolene

    Wow, I love this. When I'm older I would love to be a country singer and use this...but who knows when that will be.

    Incredible use of words.

    Wow

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Great poem..i love the idea and u executed it perfectly.
    thanks so much for the comments xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    'i don't think you will be ever worth
    for what i have left behind' wow... that is one heck of a line. That one line tells your whole story.

    Yeah, when we are young we just wish to grow up. With every wish there is a price to pay. Great poem once again.

    Lots of Love
    Michelle

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I agree with you. going back to being a child would be fantastic. but of course we would have to deal with the trials and tribulations of that day. but one can still wish no?
    nice job! one can really feel the emotion.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Take me back
    for once if you could
    to the time when i used to smile
    to my childhood

    I think we all wish we could go back to when we were children and so carefree....no worries...except bedtime...or a skined knee...when things were so simple..

    there is a tear in my every smile
    you never cared to find
    i don't think you will be ever worth
    for what i have left behind

    How I wish you could find the love you deserve. I will pray for your love to reopen her eyes and see the wondeful man you are.

    Excellent job on this poem.
    Love Cindy