Great emotion put behind the words..5.0

Great emotion, I could relate to this one so I really liked it. Rhyme wasn't bad, word choice was good, however the flow was a little rough. You could work on this to make it better, and it could become and excellent poem.

Good work!
4/5

So sad
you have a nack for poetry and your poem is really beautiful. i wish that i could give you some advise to meke it better but i'd only runin (sp?) it .
5/5
Keep up the good work

To me it seemed a little forced on the rhyming. It is a good poem that people can relate to. !!! good job love. 5/5

I like this poem a lot i mean i cant say that i can relate but your flow was pretty good and i love these lines>>>I'm so confused on what to do
Was our friendship ever true?
Dont put that pen down girl...

Another great poem of yours. Although it's a sad friendship poem, it's really good. There is a couple of grammatical errors, but it's really good. Great job! 5/5

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