Death

I really liked this poem, however at least to me when i write about a subject i like hinting at the subject and hitting the more emotional side without dirrectly saying the subject, but the feelings, and still being able to know the subject.

It was different to see the subject blantely out there and in your face. It was very forceful, and a new perspective to me. Great Job.

~AloneNHurt

I absolutely love the way you wrote this poem. It's a sad poem. I love reading these type of poems because it shows poeple do for the one they love. Great poem. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

I can really relate 2 this poem, the temptation of doing it, and the fact you know no1 would care or even shed a tear. very deep

Love the poem 5/5 but u have a good thing going 4 u and a wonderful daughter.

I can feel what your saying n the feeling that u had when u wrote so i give ya a 5.0