It's good!!

Wow, thats an awesome poem! Its so intense and fits very well as your username, fantastic piece, lovely and morbid.

Great poem! the way you describe the pain is enticing..

WOW this is an amzing poem. The rhthym and rhyms are wonderful. I can really connect with it. Thanx for the comments 2. Keep up the good writeing. Your very talented....Nikki x0

''Looking out onto the things Ive always feared.''

I feel that alot too. V.Awesome poem.

Lv A, x

I liked this poem alot thanks fo our comment on mine, i enjoyed this poem and thoroughly understand the feelings it seems to vibrate with its deep and sort of revealing telling all while at the same time telling little its an amazing work in my opinion great job its a 5/5 if ive ever seen one
~jacob