Slit

by crystaljean88   Dec 8, 2005


I done did it,
On my wrist i made a long slit.

Oh s**t, what the f**k did i do?
I hope you know the reason this happened is cause of you.

Why was i so stupid to cut my vein?
You was the person who put me in my miserable irritating pain.

"Wow" i say when i look at the long slit.
I just realized something.. for me and this you don't give a s**t.

F**k it, i done made it to where i will die,
I only wish you was here to hear me cry.

I'm sorry but now is that time,
Now i know i done cut myself down to my prime.

I love you baby,
I just proved to you that over you i went crazy.

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  • 17 years ago

    by retro babii

    Wow thats really deep, very emotional. what we would do for love?? your poems are all really good :) take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I felt this was kind of cliche, with the whole cutting over someone else.

    Neverhteless, the imagery you painted was beautifully done, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader.
    The flow was shaky in a couple of places but good for the most part.

    Despite being relatively short, you managed to pack in a lot of depth and emotion into this piece.

    I loved the ending line though, I found it to be very powerful and intense.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    5/5 alot of feeling i love it but im sorry u feel that way if u need to talk let me know

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Ohh wow, this poem brought tears to my eyes, I kinda relate to it....Great job indeed.
    Thank you so so much for commenting, well on almost all of my poems, you don't know how much that means to me, I appreciate it so so much =0)
    Keep up the good work...

    Much Lova Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    Very passionate, it was deep and i can feel ur pain just by reading it so keep ur head up gurl 5.0

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