Very passionate, it was deep and i can feel ur pain just by reading it so keep ur head up gurl 5.0

Ohh wow, this poem brought tears to my eyes, I kinda relate to it....Great job indeed.
Thank you so so much for commenting, well on almost all of my poems, you don't know how much that means to me, I appreciate it so so much =0)
Keep up the good work...

Much Lova Sabrina

5/5 alot of feeling i love it but im sorry u feel that way if u need to talk let me know

I felt this was kind of cliche, with the whole cutting over someone else.

Neverhteless, the imagery you painted was beautifully done, it creates very vivid pictures for the reader.
The flow was shaky in a couple of places but good for the most part.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to pack in a lot of depth and emotion into this piece.

I loved the ending line though, I found it to be very powerful and intense.

Wow thats really deep, very emotional. what we would do for love?? your poems are all really good :) take care